Thursday, April 22, 2010

Young And Beautiful Comments

Rating: 5.0

What is beauty...
when the mind is empty,
and the soul is numb?
It is a gift of youth,
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Selena Miranda
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Lindbergh Hughes 22 April 2010

A nice lovely poem! ! ! It's a beautiful way to describe how the beauty of the youth ends like 'weeds in the garden', roses that 'wither and die.'I loved very much mainly the last lines.It's a very interesting and creative way to compare life as flowers that grows, wither and after die, mainly nowdays, when people are afraid to get old or to die, and don't see the main purpose of their lives.'If we could live forever, life wouldn't be life, but eternity and the eternity is what we are waiting for after this life...' Congratulations! ! ! Keep writing +10! ! ! !

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