Thursday, August 14, 2008

Young Comments

Rating: 3.5

(dedicated to L Árc-en-Ciel, a great rock band from Japan)

face your days
spread your wings
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Subbaraman N V 06 May 2009

I am 68 years young fully inspired!

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K. V. Venkataramana 24 February 2009

Beautiful and inspiring poem! I am reminded my youthful days. K.V.Venkataramana

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Carol Rhodes 10 September 2008

Well said, sir. Many young people, as we know, struggle with their emotions, are still maturing, often working while going to school, dating and are trying to deal with all the temptations around every corner. Your words are an inspiration. Should be required reading in every school in every country. Thank you for sharing your amazing insight and wisdom. Carol

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Sean Foxx 02 September 2008

Exellent poem. Its stanzas brought the image and feelings of when I was younger to the fore front of my mind. The memories and emotions of youth are strong and you managed to tap it so that anyone who reads this poem will remember their own childhood. Bravo.

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Sakura Tomoko 19 August 2008

Lovely words spawned from a swav writer.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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