You have heart and feelings
To write more about being
Human on earth with all that you care
And prove what really you are!
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Good but could be better Arsi Anon20 hours ago It sounds incomplete. You should revise the ending. Also, you have a few grammar mistakes. But the idea is there and it is strong. It's a pretty creative idea, I guess, writing about writing. I like it, but you could improve it. :)
Feeling the Nature around Bhuwan Joshi20 hours ago Definitely a nice pointer to those of us who have no time to stand and stare the gifts of Nature...... Comment +1