Monday, May 11, 2009

....You Would Still Be Mine Comments

Rating: 4.9

Moments of regret
Days of emptiness
Nights of loneliness
Keeps filling my heart
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Eyan Desir
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Noha El3wdy 23 May 2009

Certainly she would nice

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a beautiful poem.passionately written......

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Jack Price 14 May 2009

NIce clean poem Eyan you left just enough for the imagination. I like this very much. nice free verse. thanks for the invite.

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Dawn Big Crow 14 May 2009

I Like it.....its sweet and romantic!

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Catrina Heart 14 May 2009

Such lovely written poem here..............Thanks! ! ! ! ! !

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Julius Babarinsa 13 May 2009

Without any doubt, you are a romantic at heart, This is an excellent love poem.

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Broken hearted Woman 13 May 2009

OMG....................that is real cool...........wish that i could write like that

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Kate Ram 13 May 2009

very adorable XD loved every word of it

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awwwwwwwwwwwwww..how beautiful i enjoyed it

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Akram Awadat 13 May 2009

very nice poem, touching poem

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Perfect in every way Eyan. I admire your grasp of English grammar and I felt the longing in your heart to be with her again. Lovely poem. 10 Karin

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Ency Bearis 13 May 2009

very nice..great write...................

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Hazem Al Jaber 13 May 2009

beautiful and its really completely to its meanings.. thanks for sharing.. hazem

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Lalitha iyer 13 May 2009

Written beautifully........................

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Tok Ngah 13 May 2009

human are just human never learn to hold tight

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Goran Gustafsson 13 May 2009

nice to read, thanks /gg

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sweet poem..... full of emotion and love...... keep writing....

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rago rago 13 May 2009

yu would still be mine.......beautifully penned and a relation intinsically written in an eloquent way........

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Reshma Ramesh 13 May 2009

very well penned...............

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Kranthi Pothineni 12 May 2009

Very well expressed and written with a good feel. Nicely penned.

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