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great poem, i can feel the disapointment, in your words, well written

wow.....wonderful poem.......i can totally relate, my dad is kinda right up there and I did tell him and he still doesnt get it, but all we can do is try right? I wish you luck. -JRose

Well, I was gonna make a recommendation that you show this to your father! Then I thought...maybe he will realize thousands will read this! AND, they will. I enjoyed reading this. Nice work,3mo. L

Wow! this is a really good poem! i have a friend, & it... it just reminds me of her & her family. I'm here for ya!