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You Won't Look At Me! Comments

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YOU WON'T LOOK AT ME!

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Celia AmanteaSchulz
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Mike Smith 05 June 2016

Very compelling piece. I was pulled through it by each line from beginning to end. Very gripping with a good hook and good cadence. It works no doubt. Thanks for sharing

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Celia AmanteaSchulz

Celia AmanteaSchulz

Racine, Wisconsin
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