Monday, August 17, 2009

You Won'T Know Me Anymore Comments

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Today I found myself asking.. Why you did this? .
After a long time wondering.. About all the things you missed..
Who ever expected? .. You and I collapse like a broken kiss..
Didn't You feel something deep... something painfull?
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Maya Hershey
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Marieta Maglas 28 August 2009

wonderful cognitive metaphor: ''Two lost souls drowning in an ocean flow of emotions and things'' wonderful abstract poem.........10

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jimmy zepp 17 August 2009

My dear fellow Lebanese poet...! ! ! ! Seems to me you'd experienced too much disappointment in your relationship, which was to be called love...But never regret my dear, it is not a coincidence; that's how you understand and reveal the hidden side of a person, in whom you put all your trust... Time leaves no perception; all is revealed by time, never regret it, just consider it another experience in your book of life, and turn another page...Remember, the book of life is brief, once a page is read...All, but love, is dead; this is my belief... Keep the good work...10+ from me...God bless! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Maya Hershey

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