Friday, September 10, 2021

You Win Comments

Rating: 5.0

You know the doctor told you to
Stick to the diet you are on.
But you will not, so what to do!
I took your dentures, they are gone,
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Ima Ryma
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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 September 2021

Typo: this line.5 stars and I take this wonderful poem to my favourite!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 September 2021

I've no choice but admit defeat....this lines is absolutely brilliant.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 10 September 2021

Me too Bravo!

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Kim Barney 10 September 2021

Had to chuckle at this! Thanks!

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