You Will Turn Criminal Comments

Brilliantly meaningful poem. Thanks.

this poem is very good. i understand alot of what it is saying. as young ppl we should pay more attention to things like this. you have good talent. i enjoyed it very much

In this darkness holds truth. Truth of kinds most don't want to envision or see. But I tell you it's about choice, no matter how much one quells your voice. You still have it to speak out against atrocities. No no one is a master death. Anymore then a master of life. you could dedicate yourself to nothing but that. Would you save everyone? No you would fail. But in your conquest you'll have moved our society a step farther.

You may feel great for time being As you might have ascended as kind The whole world may seem to be in your grip But you won’t know when it may go out of your hand or slip