You Will Not Rain Comments

Maybe you will be surprised as I run from first page to the last one...reason is that I´d like to read them all... now...and at once...what is not possible :) ....but back to your poem...The topic of it is so much actual, so much serious, so much alarming. Looking back on our life time we remember...times when rivers was clear, full af fishes, snow was white, sky was blue, the air was clean without pollution...we had less of all, but enjoyed all more....What caused all this greedness, the will to own more and most...we lost a realy sense of life, we are going to destroy our mother Earth...we have to stop...we must improve the sins we caused! ! !

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The world has been stripped... Chenoble, acid rain no -- gain Point well spelled out ++++regards

What is free from you as gift? For sharing natural wealth we have rift No one is budging with little shift

I know you will not rain As you find in it no gain All our efforts are in vain Problems follow like in chain

Little more delay may invite wrath Hunger all over and terrible deaths Man will kill man for simple bread

Air we have completely polluted Chemicals and poisons in water diluted No area we have left for natural intervention>>>>>>>>>>>>..10

You seem to be suggesting here that the Lord sends no rain because He's not pleased with the way we're treating the planet. We're hardly cooperative either; our selfishness exacerbates the global crisis. Another thoughtful piece.

Man will kill man for simple bread You will be alive but lie will be dead What is free from you as gift? For sharing natural wealth we have rift No one is budging with little shift We need solution with meaningful lift very good message for man

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Man will kill man for simple bread You will be alive but lie will be dead

Little more delay may invite wrath Hunger all over and terrible deaths.............10

What is free from you as gift? For sharing natural wealth we have rift

Little more delay may invite wrath Hunger all over and terrible deaths

We deserve no mercy and pity Villages ruined and rushing towards city No more means and loosing entity

I know you will not rain As you find in it no gain All our efforts are in vain Problems follow like in chain

I know you will not rain As you find in it no gain All our efforts are in vain Problems follow like in chain............10

know you will not rain As you find in it no gain..........10

What is free from you as gift? For sharing natural wealth we have rift........10

No area we have left for natural intervention Only destruction and no steps for prevention......10