Saturday, July 25, 2009

You Will Never Know Comments

Rating: 5.0

I just want to runaway and hide
Keep all these feelings inside
Don’t show emotion as you walk away
Its only weakness, they’ll ask you to stay
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John Johnston
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T Brwn 29 July 2009

the use of repeating the first stanza at the start and at the end is really interesting, creates a beautiful and emotional effect.

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Marieta Maglas 25 July 2009

'' I want to leave so you can be free I just need you to know what you mean to me But I can’t find the words they’re not in my head “I love you” are the only ones unsaid'' nice lyric poem, well written..10

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