Wednesday, March 29, 2017

You Will Never Know Comments

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If only you knew the truth whats really on my mind
All the pain and emptiness you left behind
There's nothing I can do to make it right
It just seems that there's no hope to fight
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Melissa Patty
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Bill Cantrell 29 March 2017

A very emotional poem with a hurt that is beyond buried deep, extreamly sad yet, written in such a way that I was feeling hurt myself at your pain, to write in such a way is the true mark of a good poet! ! A great job my friend! 10

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Melissa Patty 29 March 2017

Thankyou so much, Honestly that means alot, Thankyou for reading it! Poetry to me is a big escape I don't know what I would do without iit in my life. God bless you x

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