Thursday, October 15, 2009

You Will Always Be Comments

Rating: 5.0

You will always be for me
Academically
More than a memory
More than eventuality
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Rani Turton
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Fay Slimm 15 October 2009

This is a fantastic use of alliteration Rani - - - loved it and more than 10..... Fay

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Daniel Kempson 15 October 2009

Amazing Rani 10 of the best and worth more Daniel

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Ian Bowen 15 October 2009

Rani, some excellent lines in your well written piece. Ian

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Meggie Gultiano 15 October 2009

Sunrise, moonrise, starrise Everyday, to my surprise The unabated beauty of this world And the world was the word ......................... beautiful lines, Rani..I love this

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Ranjit Ravindran 15 October 2009

Wow....I am speechless.

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