Monday, November 7, 2011

You Will Always Be On My Mind Comments

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You will always be on my mind

The splendor of true love,
where you allow the wall of fear to fall completely down.
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Castellenas John
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C F 12 March 2019

Fantastic poem, could feel both joy, hesitancy, sadness, longing. Very well crafted.

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 March 2019

I see how you look at me. I want someone to show me the world. Teach me pleasure and pain. Show me what love support to be. I want a man's hands on my body. Not a boy.' emotions, eros, love, infatuation, attraction........ a well framed poem. tony

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