You Who 'Love' Me Comments

nice and short what can i say its a good poem, sometimes the people we fall in love with they only bring pain, but some they do bring joy to our lifes.

Your word pattern is exquisite. Love need be pure and not a fist full of the others throat. Your poem is great in its simplicity because it conveys so much. You love someone with absolute purity, while the love returned is stained with deceit. 10! !