You Were, You Are Comments

I think of the emotion in your eyes Silent, unspoken. Rachel Ann Butler

wow! ! ! this is amazing. a true master piece of poetry. the way you ended it was very good. good job. Crystal

Beautifully written Thank you for sharing

very true..and well written!

You give yourself away in words with eloquence and grace. Beautiful write. Warm regards, Sandra

Moving and thought provoking acknowledgement of love and lost lost. Well done, Lizelah.

poetry of life...rendered in tears...10

a sensitive write effusing with emotions

I liked this poem especially the first stanza.

Truly beautiful Rani... HG: -) xx

This is a wonderful poem.... I would deleate the third stanza though. 'I think of the stanzas and sentences That this hand transcribed into poems.' The first stanza is great!