You Were With Me When I Left, Though You Didn'T Know It Comments

Your best yet I feel as if I am in conversation with you and we are planning a secret rendez-vous Namaste Peter

Eila: This is absolutely brilliant. I recommend, as another reviewer has suggested, that you omit punctuation altogether and just let the lines and thoughts flow. Martin

This is a truely wonderful poem. There are a lot of vivid and unique images and it is haunting too. You might want to review the punctuation, however, as it is irregular. Good job!