You Were There 3 Comments

Tyler, Just wanted to say I love this one too..... Any time you can make people feel something with your words.. Well this one works for me.. 10! ! ! Always keep your heart open... Katherine

Tyler, the death of your dog has obviously effected you very deeply. I read your first poem on the subject, but this one is better - not because it is less loving, but because it reads more like a poem in the way you have constructed it. The repetition of the line 'you were there' is a good poetic device (like the chorus of a song) to reinforce the intensity of your message and the final stanza is very nicely phrased. I like this poem very much. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

wow really touching but i like it a lot.. nice work krista

A very touching poetry - a great tribute to Levi