Thursday, May 2, 2019

You Were The Source Comments

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that day
you didn't give me anything
without your beautiful smiling;
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Edward Kofi Louis 15 July 2019

Without the fragrance of your beautiful rose! ! ! 🌷💃🖊 Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 May 2019

you forget the day what you got right and complain of day alright Friend PYAAZ (onion) you send water my eyes no message nor massage in metaphorical poetry does love secretly lies and the lovers intelligent one all cover your eyes They kiss you as and when they request for a comment message or massage whichever poet friend MB of BD

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 May 2019

And I forgot to say, these point is very subtly brought out by the poet of You were The Source. Lovely write.

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 May 2019

From the Muse a poet needs inspiration and nothing else. That day poem was all in poet's mind. One inspiration is in place, it become the Gangotri as its poetic source, and Ganges flow from there to gather mass.

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Akhtar Jawad 05 May 2019

The day needed a holiday for all other beauties as it was reserved for a poem and the poem needed pains in a heart and tears in eyes. A touching poem.

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