In times of travail I was there
In times of depression I stood by you
In times of mock and scorn I shielded you
In times of bitterness I sorrowed with you
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I love the fact that you were able to depict the feeling of unrequited love, pain, rejection and loneliness in clear and simple diction. This is absolutely wonderful, I loved every line!
Thanks a bunch dear, I appreciate... I look forward to reading some of your write ups someday
In times of joy you run to me In times of success I celebrate with you In times of wealth I sought after you In times of prosperity my luck I gave you.......fascinating expression! Well penned....10
Dear poet Victor, your poem is very intense and touching, The feelings of love and pain come clear, A nice poem to read.
I must applaud you.. For your great impact you've made and for more you're about to do.. You've given lots of people hope and our fate is sure that we're never alone. For in the times of travail I stood by you. In times of depression I stood by you In times of mock and scorn I shielded you In times of bitterness I sorrowed with you In times of trial, just like the support of an eagle's.. God be your strength.
Thanks to you bro... I do really appreciate this You are wonderful
Care 4 me.. But not a feel do I get.. Bcos I have left 4 d one hu luvs me.. So tragic.. Its well
Care 4 me.. But not a feel do I get.. Bcos I have left 4 d one hu luvs me.. So tragic.. Its well
The one who would kiss me goodnight Down the walls of immortality You were never alone But you left me lonely........love, desire to be always united, to be together and the sense of loneliness in the absence of love....... well depicted sweet poem with so many examples.. than ku dear poet. tony
Dear Poet Victor, I am really happy to have read your poem. You have a good style of writing. Your thoughts are clear. I am sure you will go far in your life with grit and determination. And most certainly, an excellent poet! .....10.
I can sense the love, pain, energy and thoughtfulness that went into your poem. The world is full of people who have put others before themselves, then there is the other type. I believe the world has more givers that takers. I hope it will always remain that way. Obiaeli, you sound like a true giver. A wonderful write!
This is really a beautiful poem on love having thrilling expression and nice diction. I cite.... Because I have left for the one who loves me The one who will not leave me alone The one who would kiss me goodnight Down the walls of immortality You were never alone But you left me lonely Thanks.10
surely love will never leave one alone! Nicely composed poem! Keep it up, my fellow!
It is a powerful piece, indeed! To feel and suffer like that costs universes! Wish you'd never be left alone, and those who have left would be back home!
A refined poetic imagination, Obiaeli. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.
Really a heartfelt piece of poetry well penned in persuasive expressions with conviction. A very passionate composition with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Victor.