Monday, September 17, 2018

You Were Never Alone Comments

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In times of travail I was there
In times of depression I stood by you
In times of mock and scorn I shielded you
In times of bitterness I sorrowed with you
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Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor
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Chinedu Dike 12 December 2019

Really a heartfelt piece of poetry well penned in persuasive expressions with conviction. A very passionate composition with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Victor.

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Favour 12 November 2019

I love the fact that you were able to depict the feeling of unrequited love, pain, rejection and loneliness in clear and simple diction. This is absolutely wonderful, I loved every line!

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Thanks a bunch dear, I appreciate... I look forward to reading some of your write ups someday

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 September 2018

In times of joy you run to me In times of success I celebrate with you In times of wealth I sought after you In times of prosperity my luck I gave you.......fascinating expression! Well penned....10

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Aniruddha Pathak 24 September 2018

Dear poet Victor, your poem is very intense and touching, The feelings of love and pain come clear, A nice poem to read.

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Ewuzie Arinze 22 September 2018

I must applaud you.. For your great impact you've made and for more you're about to do.. You've given lots of people hope and our fate is sure that we're never alone. For in the times of travail I stood by you. In times of depression I stood by you In times of mock and scorn I shielded you In times of bitterness I sorrowed with you In times of trial, just like the support of an eagle's.. God be your strength.

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Ifediirichukwu Victor 23 September 2018

Thanks to you bro... I do really appreciate this You are wonderful

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Enendu Mmesoma 21 September 2018

Care 4 me.. But not a feel do I get.. Bcos I have left 4 d one hu luvs me.. So tragic.. Its well

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Enendu Mmesoma 21 September 2018

Care 4 me.. But not a feel do I get.. Bcos I have left 4 d one hu luvs me.. So tragic.. Its well

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Dr Antony Theodore 20 September 2018

The one who would kiss me goodnight Down the walls of immortality You were never alone But you left me lonely........love, desire to be always united, to be together and the sense of loneliness in the absence of love....... well depicted sweet poem with so many examples.. than ku dear poet. tony

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Ifediirichukwu Victor 20 September 2018

Thank you for that inspiring comment. I'm grateful

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 September 2018

Dear Poet Victor, I am really happy to have read your poem. You have a good style of writing. Your thoughts are clear. I am sure you will go far in your life with grit and determination. And most certainly, an excellent poet! .....10.

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Ifediirichukwu Victor 20 September 2018

Thanks dear, I'm grateful...

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Captain Cur 19 September 2018

I can sense the love, pain, energy and thoughtfulness that went into your poem. The world is full of people who have put others before themselves, then there is the other type. I believe the world has more givers that takers. I hope it will always remain that way. Obiaeli, you sound like a true giver. A wonderful write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2018

This is really a beautiful poem on love having thrilling expression and nice diction. I cite.... Because I have left for the one who loves me The one who will not leave me alone The one who would kiss me goodnight Down the walls of immortality You were never alone But you left me lonely Thanks.10

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Ifediirichukwu Victor 19 September 2018

I've discovered you love poetry in heart. Thanks a lot.

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Ramesh T A 19 September 2018

surely love will never leave one alone! Nicely composed poem! Keep it up, my fellow!

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Ifediirichukwu Victor 19 September 2018

Thanks, I'm really grateful.

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Oleg Vorobyov 19 September 2018

It is a powerful piece, indeed! To feel and suffer like that costs universes! Wish you'd never be left alone, and those who have left would be back home!

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Ifediirichukwu Victor 19 September 2018

Thanks for the encouraging comment. I'm grateful.

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 September 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Obiaeli. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor

Obiaeli Ifediirichukwu Victor

Umuchu in Auguata L.G.A of Anambra state
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