Monday, September 22, 2014

You Were Never A No Comments

Rating: 5.0

As hard as it is
Stepping away
Take with you this
You were never a No
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Susan Lacovara
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Joshua Terpening 29 September 2014

Kind of encouraging after a breakup. Thanks.

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Daniel Brick 29 September 2014

This is such a beautiful poem, I'm speechless in admiration...This is such a bitter sweet poem, I'm filled with emotion... The poem shows that even when a relationship fails, there is love connecting the couple like an electric current that won't stop but keeps generating good will and appreciation - which the refrain YOU WERE NEVER A NO verifies. This is the ambiguity of love which your poem captures so beautifully. It fills me with the purest emotion. There; s nothing more I can say.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 22 September 2014

I would let go of your hand. You were never a no. Beautifully expressed feelings in this poem. Nice one.

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Susan Lacovara

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