Saturday, June 3, 2006

You Were Never A Little Girl Comments

Rating: 5.0

Your world is fragile glass
Every day breaking like bones
Against the heartless pavement
Of this dingy city where dreams disappear
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Uriah Hamilton
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Dee Daffodil 09 February 2007

Wow...This shows a lot of insight into the life of a working girl. As well as a very sympathetic and kind heart. Hugs, Dee

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Ebone' Ingram 25 August 2006

another amazing and heartfelt piece...you rock eni da kid

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Ivy Christou 08 June 2006

if only more men were like you Uriah.. the world would not have been so scary. Take care HBH

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Chuck Audette 08 June 2006

A hard condition described with heart. But rather than 20, she needs a new start. -chuck

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Ernestine Northover 04 June 2006

Your a good soul Uriah, I always guessed you were a kind one too. The good samaritan obviously. Love Ernestine XXX

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Hugh Cobb 03 June 2006

Dear Uriah, Loved the gentlemanly touch here and the compassionate spirit! Hugh

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Sandra Fowler 03 June 2006

The street is a lonely place to be without a protector.Your compassion becomes you, Uriah. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 03 June 2006

This is so sad, and too often the case, we reach a point in our lives where we realize that inorder of changing something on the outside first we must try and change something on the inside A great poem, Love Duncan x

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