You Were My Girl Comments

Kgaitsedi... this beautifully penned. it still rhyme nicely even if its's coming from a sad and heavy heart.

oh! ! so beautiful...........iam sorry for your loss....god bless you and well penned

this is a beautiful but sad poem, must have been dealing with a lot of feelings when you wrote this piece...its a great read

A difficult subject to address but you have managed well to convey your thoughts and feelings. The ending is particularly meaningful (not just a fancy face) which ties in beautifully with your second line about the missing face. You succeeded in finding subtle rhymes.