Tuesday, January 15, 2013

You Were Here First- Locked And Loaded Comments

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She found your words,
You left them behind,
Words from an inked bullet.....
Her love was declined.
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Ruby Honeytip
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Stevie Taite 17 January 2013

Indeed, intuition, understanding and insight, beautifully and elegantly rhymed. Your poems always take my breath away darling! They just never fail! X x x x x

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Valerie Dohren 17 January 2013

Beautiful Ruby, very well written.

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Lyn Paul 15 January 2013

This is brilliant Ruby. You tell a great story. i admire your strength too.

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Titi Dale 15 January 2013

Glad I was the first here to comment Ruby! As always, you deliver great philosophy and rhyming :)

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