Sunday, August 24, 2014

You Were A Dream To Me Comments

Rating: 3.5

Your dream came to me so true,
as if you touched me again with your love

Your words struck me like arrows,
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Asma Khan
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Saadat Tahir 24 August 2014

a disturbing if lucid write... its simple....free form and well directed. amply conveys the intended feelings nice liked

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Khairul Ahsan 24 August 2014

A beautiful poem with a nice caption. Your last two lines remind me of my poem titled 'Love Burns'..

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Asma Khan 22 December 2015

Thank you so much for reading my poem and sharing your comments.

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