Thursday, February 1, 2007

You Want Me? ... Come And Find Me! Comments

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'Well, Hello there! What? '
You want me to feel empty
You say I'm not good enough
Telling me that I can't keep believing
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Kristin Nicole RothDavis
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Dee Daffodil 01 February 2007

BRAVO KRISTIN! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! What an excellent piece of poetry for number 100! ! ! Nicely said...you go girl! ! Hugs, Dee

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Original Unknown Girl 01 February 2007

Kristin - love the style of this - a great, strong message sent out there. And received loud and clear... congrats too on your 100th scribing! Great work. HG: -) x

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Ana x 01 February 2007

reminds me of a song for amy lee, nice poem

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 February 2007

......E X T R A....E X T R A....R E A D... A L L... A B O U T... I T! ..... K R I S T I N...D A V I S.... P E N S.... P O E M....N U M B E R 1 0 0! C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S...P O E T E S S...K ON THIS SPECIAL DAY! F.J.R........................................02/.01/07............................................frankster

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 01 February 2007

Kris...I do believe you have composed a lyrical lick, indeed, lassie... Strong pronouncement and well metered work, here...like this a lot....can hear both a rap & a rock song within this piece...

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Yay! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Rockin' strong words from a rockin' strong gal! Memorable, too. This will hit I reckon just where it should. Fab! t x

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Margaret Alice 01 February 2007

For I know how to now use my mind As a neverending instrument Call it heaven-sent! This is such a fantastic declaration, God or Loving Consciousness or Your Inner Self - or whatever term you prefer to use - gave you your Mind as a Gift and you use it to lift up yourself and now us through your writings - Thank you.

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Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Kristin Nicole RothDavis

Southern Oklahoma... <country gal here>
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