Saturday, March 22, 2014

You Want And I Give Comments

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You want security?
Just know,
remember these words as you lie in bed,
you walk to school,
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Brianna Stuckey
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Dr Antony Theodore 25 November 2015

security, warmth, love, loyalty, .. You are trying to find solutions. we all cogitate about all these as we grow in life. very nice poem thank you. tony

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Yvette Jenkins 22 March 2014

I feel this betrayal that you speak of from this person who has done wrong. Your poem made me say whoa. It has a lot of emotions. Final closure. Good poem.

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