Each day you wake up with a frown
Rumours keep spreading around town
That you’re suffering a mental breakdown
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An exceptional poem, very meaningful and i like the structure too
' Deliver you from your lonely existence You keep fighting love Bending it around like a curve With your glowering face Reserving only a lonely place, Halting happiness to arrive in your life ' perfect, Sylvia thnx
wow. that is totally me..I love it. It's so sad and yet is soo beatuiful. I really love it.
you know, i admit, that poem describes me perfectly, he, he, good job on this one Sylvia.
Loneliness shuts down all pleasures of life.