Friday, March 31, 2006

You Wander As A Lonely Comments

Rating: 3.7

Each day you wake up with a frown
Rumours keep spreading around town
That you’re suffering a mental breakdown
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Sylvia Chidi
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Leela chatterjee 26 June 2018

Loneliness shuts down all pleasures of life.

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Melvin T 11 January 2009

An exceptional poem, very meaningful and i like the structure too

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Ahmad Saqer 02 December 2008

' Deliver you from your lonely existence You keep fighting love Bending it around like a curve With your glowering face Reserving only a lonely place, Halting happiness to arrive in your life ' perfect, Sylvia thnx

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Mithzi Silva 17 September 2008

i love it..its perfectly sad

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Dolan Doran 27 July 2008

wow. that is totally me..I love it. It's so sad and yet is soo beatuiful. I really love it.

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Pat Diaz 11 February 2008

Its a sad but beautiful poem at the same time i really like it

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Terra Somroka 12 May 2006

you know, i admit, that poem describes me perfectly, he, he, good job on this one Sylvia.

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