You’ve Got To Live Through The Paradox Comments

‘to either explode or coolly diffuse what's there/with no reaction but calm consideration.’…Paradox is has to Coaxed [lolol]… Explosion is fragmentation [? Destruction] may be heroic [valor]…not Radicalism…but diffuse is ‘Expansion’…for me right path… indeed educative. poetry enjoyed and learnt much Sir…thanks for sharing Regards Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10 PS Calmly active and Actively Calm ~ Gita n

listen to the still small voice inside and then decide. Sometimes too much consideration of the evidence leads to a stalemate Trust your instincts

I thought that was amazing, maybe a little hard to grasp in the beginning, but in a read or two it really shines through. Never stop writing. ;)

Great work, my friend! You have clearly gotten your message across....Well penned, keep it up! 10+++ (check my poem titled: PARADOX) Love and Peace...

love your pomes all of them sounds grate

thought provoking; the title reads like a thesis; paradox, surely, the givens the unresolves, the challenges, the future; all, make up the present, and qualify the next second

there're plenty of choices but i doubt the freedom to choose...don't too many impersonal forces determine our course?

Makes one put on the thinking cap

'paradox' or may be it's life in it's ever changing, ever stagnant, ever hopeful n hopeless, ever giving or never giving. good write.

i agree with Chitra - it's a thought provoking poem, very profound

Very nicely written..a profound theme...thought-provoking...a choice between rationality and extremities...10+

A'paragon' of a paradox you weave here, Amrit.'Free Will' and choice, are as you astutely allude to in your piece...Its not so easy! Our lives are constantly challenged, and the virtuous gift of acumen is the major player as we swim the seas, scale the mountains, and skip-jump o; er the potholes of Life....I like the tone you set from the onset, as well as the subtle employment of meataphoric language. Commendable Work! ~FjR~

the noise of regret, anxiety and fear......very interesting and touchy write. well done. really enjoyed your thought. thanks for sharing. pl see some of my poems too.

A brilliant poem and nice to read all through.

i am the third one who rated it 10... because it would be unjust for this beautiful poem if will rate it less than what it deserves...

Very nicely written. Reading your poem, I thouht of Grandmother Willow (in Pocahontes) who said 'listen to your heart'. And you are very right, it is not easy to listen to our heart. What is deep inside our heart and soul is so often blurred by our mind and ego (and not so rarely by the ego of others) . The choices by the ego are often most troublesome. The wisdom that transpires in your poem is extremely valuable. You seem to be a master at pouring wisdom in melodious verses. Congrats.

Your poem is empowering! Amidst the noise we choose because we CAN. Sometimes, we forget this. Thanks for the reminder.

Thanks dear Amrit. its really a very good poem. Imagination much stronger than reality. I myself live in soul.I do not bother for my body. Oneday it will perish. Thanks again.

This is the truth, this is what philosophy is claiming about, deep thinking, fascinating and rational. Although there are irregular rhymes still this is a well written craft.10+

Very wordy, very long, and very good. You have captured man's choices and put them in direct competition with his heart, mind and soul. A very good write. I give you a 10.