Saturday, September 9, 2006

You Upset With Me, Father? Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Father?
Yes...LAWRENCE!
'Did I catch You at a bad time? '
No, My Son...What is it? ...Now?
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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Tailor Bell 09 September 2006

this is a great read for me, love the inserted humor amidst weightier matters, and flavor of the pace. brilliant work. -Tailor

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Diane Violet 09 September 2006

I may not have caught everything you're trying to say here, but we can't second guess ourselves. What am I talking about, I did. But this poem did make me think of something, went and checked, and yep, if someone deletes their poems any saved as favourites are lost also. But anyway I'm getting off track. The father sounds upset, but with the statement regarding the donkey, the answer to that is no. So the father is not upset but the son is?

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