Sunday, April 13, 2008

You Touched Something Comments

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Like red on a rose
The dew in the morning
The scent of lilies in the sun
You touched something...
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Patricia Gale
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Nimal Dunuhinga 31 May 2010

Yes the rain touches the heart like this beautiful poem.

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There's a rarefied and enchanted atmosphere in this poem. It's entitled 'You touched something' but one feels something impalpable. Symbolistic, I'd say.

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Lillian J. 22 April 2008

This is a very pretty write, Patricia, nicely done! Lilly :)

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Abha Sharma 19 April 2008

your lines with rich nature imagery, the sentiments embedded in them..all this touch the reader..quite a touching one and soothing too

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Rani Turton 18 April 2008

I loved 'the sound of a wild full moon'. Thanks.

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Broken Peaces 14 April 2008

Absolutely lovely poem you really touched something ' my heart ' thanks big ten Chris

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Thad Wilk 13 April 2008

A very mesmerizing poem Patricia! A pleasure to read this brilliant gem! ! ! *10*! Best Wishes! Friend Thad

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