Like red on a rose
The dew in the morning
The scent of lilies in the sun
You touched something...
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There's a rarefied and enchanted atmosphere in this poem. It's entitled 'You touched something' but one feels something impalpable. Symbolistic, I'd say.
your lines with rich nature imagery, the sentiments embedded in them..all this touch the reader..quite a touching one and soothing too
Absolutely lovely poem you really touched something ' my heart ' thanks big ten Chris
A very mesmerizing poem Patricia! A pleasure to read this brilliant gem! ! ! *10*! Best Wishes! Friend Thad
Yes the rain touches the heart like this beautiful poem.