Saturday, January 1, 2005

You (To My Grandmother'Patsy'Upon Her Death) Comments

Rating: 4.9

I will think of you when the curtain is drawn
Like rays of sunlight that crescent the dawn
Like breezes that cool the silence of night
Whispering meaning to secrets of life
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Louise Bizzari
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You write such beautiful poetry, and nature poetry is by far the hardest to write, yet you put words to it so wonderfully. I'm giving you a 10, I only wish there were a higher score that could be given for you truly deserve it.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 04 March 2005

It is a wonder that no one but your friend has dicovered your talent. Could it be that............ No I won't say what I think, namely that you might be better off trying pottery. H

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Jean-Francois Denis 23 February 2005

I wouldn't worry to wonder if my poems are beautiful or not if I was you. Such a sweet and wonderful write again! I enjoyed it Louise! ~JD~

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