You To Me Comments

after reading this anyone can understand what he means to you......... nice poem

well done, a heavy topic yet treated in a such heartfelt way

a melancholy desire...a love yearning to be reciprocated...good penning! keep it up!

a nice write on love...on longing and yearning...the line '...you are the darkness that brightens up my path...' tells a lot...congrats lhen! 10

I like this, A...It owns a flounce of rhythm, that keeps the reader in step with the way you most likely would have recited it....Metre is 3/4th's of poetics worth, for without it....even the finest words can be dismerited.Very Nice Penning, young lady. ~ FjR ~ ..2008..

so beautiful, thanks for sharing!