Thursday, October 3, 2019

You Think Wrong Of Me Comments

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I'm a dove with a face of a hulk,
But you think wrong of me!

You think of me a little too cocky, contumacious;
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Chima Ononogbu
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Sandra Erickson 05 February 2020

Hello. I'm going to assume this is a translation- yes? The phrasing and word choices are brilliant. " " my gait breaking the grounds and quaking your gaiety, My name trots byways of your imagination as a buggy of horror, " " piquant masculinity" Very much enjoyed this poem.

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Edward Kofi Louis 20 October 2019

Standing up against the odds! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Michael Walker 15 October 2019

The refrain 'But you think wrong of me' is powerful. Other people misunderstand you, or they jump to conclusions. You are right to correct them.

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Chima Ononogbu 15 October 2019

Thanks Mike for your inspirational observation.

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Jason James 03 October 2019

Your poems are riveting. I really enjoy the magical flow.

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Gajanan Mishra 03 October 2019

Black - Really beautiful

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