Wednesday, November 26, 2008

You Think I Don' T Remember* Comments

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You think I don' t remember, the night it started
Well I do
I ran away, because my heart was breaking
I left a note you never found
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Mrs. Cynosure
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sky dreams 30 July 2009

It's weird that I stumbled upon this poem today... earlier today i said those words to my mother 'You think i don't remember? I remember, mom.' Only it was about my father... I can relate to your writing.. and because of that I feel the deepness of anger and hate... but past that is an even deeper sense of sadness and pain. this is a great write and eye opening poem.

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Asif Andalib 28 November 2008

Dear Crystal It made me speechless for some moments and my eyes teary. Your pain and sorrow are reflected in the poem so wonderfully.10/10. Wishing your never-ending happiness. Asif Andalib

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Aijaz Asif 27 November 2008

so sad write indeed, it seems when you wrote it you were too badly hurt, and its shown clearly in those lines...all i can say is 'forgive' because thats the biggest punishment for life long....i liked it and thanks for sharing 10 keep smiling rgds asif

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Heather Hill 26 November 2008

awww this is so sad sweetie...I wish there was words I could say that would make things better...but I know there isn't any...I hope one day you will be free from all of this great poem...made me get teary eyed...loved it...take care be strong!

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