Monday, January 3, 2005
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The daylight which shows a thousand pictures shines upon your face
the smoothness of life shows your evervescent grace
The poems that you write for me shows for me this much [----}
and makes me light to your touch
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Arienne Smith
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Herbert Nehrlich1
03 January 2005
Good poem; if you could correct the two spelling mistakes. One is effervescent... H
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7/28/2025 9:18:28 AM # 1.0.0
nice write Arriene, very creative and attic beauty.maxim muyu