Friday, November 21, 2008

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Hello There
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You there
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Asif Baloch
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Shashendra Amalshan 10 August 2009

Hey youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu this is nice.. I like the word play here.. good.. different one indeed... nice to read! ! many tens.... Cheeerss! ! ! ! ! shash! !

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Mamta Agarwal 11 December 2008

the conversational style, in modern lingo catches the eye. expressive. aren't we all inspired by fellowpoets on ph. we are like an extended family..lovely, Asif. i wrote a poem, My dear friends on poem hunter. style different, you might like it.10 Mamta

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Kite Remedy 04 December 2008

That's an expressive write.. Beautifully assembled.. Nice..

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Sarwar Chowdhury 25 November 2008

Hello Asif! Its an WOW poem! Finely penned! 10+++

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Maryam Khan 25 November 2008

hmmmm---- what should i say about u? i m totally speechless. Asif u are just fantastic poet. its really very interesting, good and marvelous poem. thnx 4 sharing. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++.

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Hi Asif, You must have know I like happy endings and am too ideallistic. But the word daffodil just colored my day to bright yellow sunshine. Your poem has strength and a little weakness (that you don't want to admit!) . Thank you Asif for sharing it. Karin Anderson

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Tissa Calvert 24 November 2008

very inspiring and heart felt plus shows and represents others not just you.

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Kallie Madison 24 November 2008

Lovely Poem! ! I enjoyed reading it! ! it's cool! ! keep on writing my friend! ! XOXO[KallieTRIGGER]™

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 24 November 2008

As Sandra said, a good tribute to the poets on poemhunter. I feel the same way.

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Sandra Fowler 23 November 2008

A charming tribute to the poets on this site. Your appreciation is worth many tens. Kind regards, Sandra

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Reshma Ramesh 23 November 2008

haha! ! yoohoooo! ! well penned...yes iam talking to u...

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Ben Gieske 22 November 2008

Nice beginning - graps one's attention. Good use of the seasonsal images and contrasts. I like the lightheartedness and playfulness of its reading.

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Asif Andalib 22 November 2008

That's like SWEETHEART OF POETS. Great going.

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Naru Kaede 22 November 2008

Wooowww... this is for all the poet? thank you, , , hehehe... the poet is always share they life and their love, , , beautifulll... nice! give u 10++

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Egi David Perdana 22 November 2008

I think it's deal on a messages

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 22 November 2008

We need love some how or rather, in our life.Theres no life without love......love mould our progress later in life. Nice piece Asif.

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Seema Aarella 21 November 2008

A kind gesture you have shown here by giving the due regards for the wonderful poets on PH...i too join hands with u in this act.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 21 November 2008

Asif, What a great poem, Love gives hope and Joy, always gets my vote if there are roses... Andrew 10

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