Thursday, August 27, 2015

You The Shining Stars Comments

Rating: 5.0

My dear little children
You are the shining stars,
You are all souls like me
Bodies are your cars.
...
Read full text

Kumarmani Mahakul
COMMENTS
Isabel Pimentel 07 June 2020

Stars shine at sky. We souls shine within body and drive. God is super shining star and he dazzles rightly. Reading such a great poem is just more than gaining knowledge. This poem is very wonderful.

0 0 Reply
Mihaela Pirjol 06 December 2018

A warm advice for children from a loving heart: as a poet, a teacher, a father, and great spiritual leader.

0 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 11 December 2016

picture of Leila Hadi xeloquent and wise ♥ 28 Aug 2015 by Leila Hadi | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xWise words and good advice, Sir. 28 Aug 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xLovely ink tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings my dear friend 28 Aug 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Thomas A Robinson xIt's a shame children grow up to be adults. 28 Aug 2015 by Thomas A Robinson | Reply picture of Mfena Ortswen xBeautiful! Children deserve to be appreciated and you did a fine job of it. Thank you. 28 Aug 2015 by Mfena Ortswen | Reply picture of Kesav Easwaran xThe love rich teacher in your poet heart shines in this poem...nice 28 Aug 2015 by Kesav Easwaran | Reply picture of.. magnolia xChildren are the future! lovely words, thank you 29 Aug 2015 by.. magnolia | Reply picture of 'witch! ' xvery sweet and a nice read. 30 Aug 2015 by 'witch! ' | Reply picture of Gary Lee xThis has a unique use of words, and it is so true that God is the way. Love it. 31 Aug 2015 by Gary Lee | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x............beautifully penned, one of my favorites of yours...thank you for sharing ★ 1 Sep 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Redbarchettadrive... xBravo sir! ~namaste! 12 Oct 2015 by Redbarchettadrive... | Reply

0 0 Reply
Amitava Sur 06 September 2015

An inspirational poem to the children whom you suppose to endear and praise. The children are really the future of society and humanity who will carry forward this earth towards future with all prosperity. very nice.

0 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 02 September 2015

You are in my hear and soul. Great piece of work.

0 0 Reply
Lyn Paul 01 September 2015

They certainly are shining stars that need nurturing and protection to reach full shine

0 0 Reply
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 30 August 2015

Children are shining stars. They are the future. For a teacher they are seekers of knowledge. Their achievement is admirable and their pranks forgivable. Beautifully depicted in the poem. Thank you.

0 0 Reply
Ayman Parray 29 August 2015

A beautiful, beautiful poem that fills my heart with tremendous love. Thank you my friend.

0 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 29 August 2015

Yes children are the shining stars, liked it.................................10

0 0 Reply
Madathil Rajendran Nair 28 August 2015

Elegant, simple poem on children. Thanks for sharing. (10)

0 0 Reply
Valsa George 28 August 2015

You seem to be a lover of children! Your advice to them will help them bloom in life. I have always enjoyed your inspirational writes to children! Yes, let them shine like stars and delight everyone with their innate charm and innocence! !

0 0 Reply
Sanjukta Nag 28 August 2015

this poem shows your love for children and how you inspire them to shine like stars or to be a czar. a poem full with hope. it's a pleasure reading this poem.10 is a lowest number to rate this poem, as it deserves more then 10. thank you sir for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 27 August 2015

Our bodies are indeed momentary cars. Vehicles to acknowledge our consciousness. To use them for positive purposes is the intent. Mind that accompanies is responsible for works of art such as this. Blessings to the poet who comprehends!

1 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
Close
Error Success