Thursday, February 4, 2016

You Taught Me How To Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dedicated to my Husband an Best Friend Paul Williams

My life was empty before you
Thought life was just filled with pain
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Atasha Williams
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Juan Olivarez 01 March 2016

Very well written. good rhyming scheme.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 17 February 2016

a hairless body is truly lovely and a man who compensates for a dad is divinity and you to that extent are lucky happy we all are for you and of course for your lovely hubby

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Atasha Williams 23 February 2016

thank u darling. I am not lucky, I am blessed. :) I believe there is some one out here for everyone. You jus have to find them :)

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Anita Khelawan 16 February 2016

Firstly, after reading you heartfelt poem these phrases come to mind I don’t want to lose you…You’ve bewitched me…You’ve completely beguiled me… the message i got from your poem was 'you’re the perfect plan I never thought of' Secondly, Girrrrrrrrl your hubby is fine lol ahahhahaha... on a serious note I hope I can find my own Paul Williams Thirdly - your piece gives me inspiration (to write about love and lovely things) .... thnx for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 February 2016

People are so unhappy with their lives That they move from place to place To find a spot where their heart can be at ease We are all in one big rat race how true! We all seek for a little bit of l ove.... you are very true in your poem. thank you . tony

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Atasha Williams 04 February 2016

A human being was split after God made Eve for Adam. If you found your other half during your journey in this miserable life, Thank God for it, I've found mine :)

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