You Take Away The Vision From My Eyes Poem by me poet yeps poet

You Take Away The Vision From My Eyes

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You have great vision
of a woman
and
perhaps all that is
by pragmatic experience

as you know
I too am Romantic
but not as much as you
are demonstrative

some day when I am better
I shall recall the time
which so suddenly
now lapses from my mind
as it is now
in a world of confusion
@79

how long will it be
that I will still so passionate be
if not physically
at least mentally

your fingers
move across my mind's synapses
and
make me see
you are not only a poet
but a poem
may be
O poet
may ALLAH Bless thee

Friday, February 22, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: feelings,girls,love and art,love and friendship,love and life,poet,poetic expression,romance,sex,woman
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Notes
This poem has been INSPIRED
BY MY GOOD POET FRIEND
MOHD ASIM NEHAL
Man of Oranges from Nagpur
I also love peaches of Canada
ALL are very juicy like women
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muzahidul Reza 22 February 2019

You Take Away The Vision From My Eyes, ha ha ha well title poem so nicely penned,10 thanks for sharing the poem with us

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 February 2019

it is so kind of u to have visited my wall i c ur a great poet with many poems within 500 some day my Moms Smiles may also be do read if you haven't please kindly thanks again MR

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 February 2019

You may be old and matured but love in the heart remains always fresh and strong. our fingers move across my mind's synapses and make me see you are not only a poet but a poem may be O poet may ALLAH Bless thee '... is so nice. Thanks for sharing.10+++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 February 2019

AGE IS JUST A NUMBER MY POETRY ABILITY WAS BEING CURBED I USED TO COMPOSE TEN POEMS DAILY NOW I HAVE RESUMED IT THats why I have composed over 15000++++++ poems may be many more yahoo and FB SWIPED ALL OWING TO JEALOUS GUYS I AM STILL ANON AND SHALL SO REMAIN READ ME READ ME IT'S ENTIRELY YOUR WILL WHO AMI to force thee otherwise I am just a poet like you may be a step behind oh DEAR AKP

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Prabir Gayen 22 February 2019

Beautiful poem...yes you are romantic by heart...

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 February 2019

so sweet of you to say so SANT PRABIR G OKAY KABIR G

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