Thursday, January 29, 2009

** You Swept Me Away *** Comments

Rating: 4.6

You swept me away
took me in arms sway
gazedly we searched
dare i say,
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ANJALI SINHA
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Braja K Sarkar 05 April 2010

Truely romantic.. I like it.

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Anand Madhukar 15 September 2009

A delicate and elegant poem, precious as a dew drop.

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Sukumar Choudhuri 12 September 2009

How romantic! A true lover can only compose so touchy lines. Thanks

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Sanjib Das 20 July 2009

ANJU, IT'S A GREAT LOVE POEM. LIKE SHAKESPEARE, YOU PROVE YOUR VERSATILITY. YOU ARE A GENIUS OF GENIUS, I BOW DOWN MY HEAD BEFORE YOU.

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Ted M 19 July 2009

So lovely! So Romantic and sweet.

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Sujit Sinha 13 July 2009

Great Poet You made me reach out for the gobblet of wine thats not there Fur Elise was easier to get. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Sujit Ps I live in the State of Gujarat where alcohol is not allowed and people die in droves drinking spurious liquor!

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Deborah Cromer 04 July 2009

I play Fur Elise on the piano. Beethoven is one of my favorites. Now, when I play this on my piano, I will remember your poem! DC

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Sarwar Chowdhury 18 June 2009

10++++ for the 'swept away' beautifully!

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a musical situation...a picture of love

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Brishti Mazumdar 06 June 2009

hey...you really swept me away...The born lover in me congratulates you for being able to create a sensuality in such a short space..10++.Luv - Brishti

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Ashraful Musaddeq 05 June 2009

Wonderful short poems, passionate write and witty composition. Amazingly your feelings. 10+++ with pleasure.

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Alf Hutchison 04 June 2009

Anjali this had me dancing to the tune...swept away..beautiful in its simplistic power...Alf

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Jack Price 25 May 2009

Great poems, short sweet and completed with the influence of the classical piece fur elise. Great write! Thanks for the invite

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Dr Nihar Ranjan Ray 24 May 2009

I s he so powerful to sweep..you away.... I like the title.

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Dr Nihar Ranjan Ray 24 May 2009

I s he so powerful to sweep..you away.... I like the title.

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Isaiah Grey 10 May 2009

A gorgeously sweeping melody infuses this piece... Very clever.

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Pandian Angelina 09 May 2009

This thy first verse I spied A rose, a queen among a crowd Gently I danced on the floor Listening to your soft music I too found the glistening pearl Form in the corner of my eye Truly, i should say - Anjali You swept me away! Wonderful work and I go on To read more of your poems! Angel

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Sandra Martyres 27 April 2009

You have surely evoked memories of Fu Elise in this poem that swept me away too..10

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Allemagne Roßmann 12 April 2009

You swept me away never took me in arms sway gazedly I searched searched you everywhere hit upon a plan to hit all grounds with every single dropp of blood for your identification its me The flies took all away when i did not follow the clergymen I did not follow what they say 'EN BOCA CERRADA NO ENTRAR MOSCAS' So up on love went a Copernicus to be stellar from abacus to abavus scaled a belief high as Vesuvius Scanned deserts all Machus to Damascus No oasis, no olive only a rose he found For every lies he wont be truthing For every truth he aint be lying Rose, sweet rose, red rose pricked him Rose, sweet rose, red rose allured him And ensued there a fight between th pricky potion, alluring venom of love's heuristics love's hysteria turning rabbits into flying rabbits with the blessings of this flies surfing of the dolphins pangs bigger than shark fangs hopping hopcroft with kangaroos taking the rose as centre and getting swept away and away in circular motions spindling and concentric yet circular motions Yes......i am swept away.Beautiful write. Full score.

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Truly, the poem swept me away! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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