You swept me away
took me in arms sway
gazedly we searched
dare i say,
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How romantic! A true lover can only compose so touchy lines. Thanks
ANJU, IT'S A GREAT LOVE POEM. LIKE SHAKESPEARE, YOU PROVE YOUR VERSATILITY. YOU ARE A GENIUS OF GENIUS, I BOW DOWN MY HEAD BEFORE YOU.
Great Poet You made me reach out for the gobblet of wine thats not there Fur Elise was easier to get. Keep writing and I will keep reading. Sujit Ps I live in the State of Gujarat where alcohol is not allowed and people die in droves drinking spurious liquor!
I play Fur Elise on the piano. Beethoven is one of my favorites. Now, when I play this on my piano, I will remember your poem! DC
hey...you really swept me away...The born lover in me congratulates you for being able to create a sensuality in such a short space..10++.Luv - Brishti
Wonderful short poems, passionate write and witty composition. Amazingly your feelings. 10+++ with pleasure.
Anjali this had me dancing to the tune...swept away..beautiful in its simplistic power...Alf
Great poems, short sweet and completed with the influence of the classical piece fur elise. Great write! Thanks for the invite
I s he so powerful to sweep..you away.... I like the title.
I s he so powerful to sweep..you away.... I like the title.
This thy first verse I spied A rose, a queen among a crowd Gently I danced on the floor Listening to your soft music I too found the glistening pearl Form in the corner of my eye Truly, i should say - Anjali You swept me away! Wonderful work and I go on To read more of your poems! Angel
You have surely evoked memories of Fu Elise in this poem that swept me away too..10
You swept me away never took me in arms sway gazedly I searched searched you everywhere hit upon a plan to hit all grounds with every single dropp of blood for your identification its me The flies took all away when i did not follow the clergymen I did not follow what they say 'EN BOCA CERRADA NO ENTRAR MOSCAS' So up on love went a Copernicus to be stellar from abacus to abavus scaled a belief high as Vesuvius Scanned deserts all Machus to Damascus No oasis, no olive only a rose he found For every lies he wont be truthing For every truth he aint be lying Rose, sweet rose, red rose pricked him Rose, sweet rose, red rose allured him And ensued there a fight between th pricky potion, alluring venom of love's heuristics love's hysteria turning rabbits into flying rabbits with the blessings of this flies surfing of the dolphins pangs bigger than shark fangs hopping hopcroft with kangaroos taking the rose as centre and getting swept away and away in circular motions spindling and concentric yet circular motions Yes......i am swept away.Beautiful write. Full score.
Truly, the poem swept me away! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Truely romantic.. I like it.