Thursday, October 11, 2018

You Surge In My Thoughts Comments

Rating: 5.0

You surge in my thoughts
On the flying white horse
to take me away in the milky sky
where nobody is gossiping
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M. Asim Nehal
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Darren Jkoeryo 15 October 2018

Amusing poem, Love is at the central place of life, Great one Asim.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 October 2018

The relation, the bond and the affections You surge in my thoughts On the flying white horse And to take me away......so touching and impressive. A beautiful poem so nicely executed.10

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T Rajan Evol 11 October 2018

Wow, this is what i call a true love. You are to good to write such poems.

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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