Friday, April 6, 2007

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After I lost you, I kept complaining
about the loneliness I felt, in spite
of all the love, concern and help
that I received from family and friends,
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Willem VanVoorthuysen
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Grace Tan 06 April 2007

A nice poem. I loved the title. Through the poem and the title, I got the full story, and it was a sweet, sad, one. To better it, perhaps you could give both the contrast of the sufferings? I thought it was a lovely poem, but if its true, my hearts' all out for you, your wife and your kid.

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Willem VanVoorthuysen

Willem VanVoorthuysen

Dutch East Indies (Indonesia)
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