Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Monday, November 21, 2016

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 08 August 2022

Excellent poem with a brilliant ending Bravo!

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Bri Edwards 12 May 2017

yes, i agree with Sister Frances (see below): i might even like a few of HER body parts! love the KB poem and like the Pocket Book poem. and in the spirit of it is better to receive than to give: you receive what i give: Bri's Visit To The 'Butcher' The doctor said: Sorry, Bri, we need to take your spleen. And, by the way, we'll amputate your left leg at your knee. To that I said: Ok, Doc. Why not take all that's in beTWEEN? Then: But, Doc, leave something with which I still can pee. bri :)

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Spock The Vegan 26 November 2016

Ha ha. I reminds me of my poem Drunken Offering, where one drunk offers the other his liver.

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Kim Barney 26 November 2016

I had to look a long time among your poems before I found it. You should have mentioned that it was a limerick, and I would have found it sooner. I finally found it under the title Limerick: Drunken Offering. I had actually read it before, but did not remember doing so, so I did not consciously steal your idea. Honest! I am having so much trouble with Poem Hunter and the annoying Security Alert that keeps freezing up my screen. I was unable to reply to your message online, so I am typing this in my word processor and will try and copy and paste it in the 'reply' box later if PH will let me. Nobody else has commented that they also get that Security Alert. Am I really the only one? Yesterday I was on PH for hours and it never happened, so I thought the problem was fixed, but today it is awful again.

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Wes Vogler 25 November 2016

Hmmm I always have been a leg man myself I am reading some of the bathroom books. All sorts of weird information.

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Sister Frances 22 November 2016

Brilliantly written...why stop at the heart.

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Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
Kim Barney
I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit
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