Sunday, August 18, 2013

You Still Touch Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

In the ruthless cage
of innocent lambs and butcher's rage
they laugh, they cry
who were to die
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chandra prakash verma
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Ramesh Rai 13 October 2013

choice is good. keep writing

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Marcus Mckinley 28 August 2013

in order to fall one must start up high. we all must live with our choices whethter good or bad. but, to still have faith in the fallen ones once loved on high shows true dedication to ones beliefs. nicely written

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