Tuesday, March 3, 2015

You Still In My Mind Comments

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you still in my mind


When I was thirteen
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Xiao Kang
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Bharati Nayak 14 March 2015

Such a lovely poem with so much of optimism in it.

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Kewayne Wadley 05 March 2015

Nice usage of words, painting yourself on the page. Kudos! With time all wounds heal, but as you said. The memory still exists. Nicely done

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Dave Walker 03 March 2015

A powerful poem, a great write.

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