Monday, September 4, 2017

You Steer Us Dear God Comments

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In a beautiful and righteous way,
You steer us Oh dear beloved God,
Turning our wheel into fortune,
You take us in leading cycle of life.
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Kumarmani Mahakul
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Mihaela Pirjol 06 December 2018

This hymn has the same soothing flow as the previous one I read. It feels so relaxing reading your poetry.

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Michael Walker 05 September 2017

A poem that is also a prayer, so sincere. I want to follow ' a path of love and peace', even though I do not always. Good repetition of 'we'. 'In nice way'- 'in a wise way' (suggestion) .

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 September 2017

To remain with you! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Lamar Cole 04 September 2017

Very nice and inspiring poem to read.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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