In a beautiful and righteous way,
You steer us Oh dear beloved God,
Turning our wheel into fortune,
You take us in leading cycle of life.
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A poem that is also a prayer, so sincere. I want to follow ' a path of love and peace', even though I do not always. Good repetition of 'we'. 'In nice way'- 'in a wise way' (suggestion) .
To remain with you! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
This hymn has the same soothing flow as the previous one I read. It feels so relaxing reading your poetry.