Thursday, August 11, 2005

You Speak I Answer Comments

Rating: 3.9

Sometimes, love is a very quiet breeze
Gently swaying May cherry blossom boughs.
Pink cotton candy drifts cool waves and tease,
Softening paired footfalls on stony paths
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Herbert Nehrlich
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This is, indeed, simply beautiful. Serene and enchanting. t x

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Anna Russell 02 March 2006

This is beautiful. A real little gem and I'm glad I found it. Hugs Anna xxx

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Herbert Nehrlich1 15 August 2005

No, my wife is M. H

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Mary Nagy 12 August 2005

Yes, it was very clear. Nice way to write. That's why I asked if the 'L' was your wife.

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Herbert Nehrlich1 12 August 2005

Raynette and Mary, I hope it is clear that the first stanza is 'her' speaking, only the second one is 'his' answer. H

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Raynette Eitel 11 August 2005

This is so beautiful it takes my breath away. How can you write such funny, non-sensical poetry and then come up with one line this? (A man of many talents!) Raynette

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Mary Nagy 11 August 2005

We have to wonder who the 'L' is............your wife? Sincerely, Mary

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