Sometimes, love is a very quiet breeze
Gently swaying May cherry blossom boughs.
Pink cotton candy drifts cool waves and tease,
Softening paired footfalls on stony paths
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This is beautiful. A real little gem and I'm glad I found it. Hugs Anna xxx
Yes, it was very clear. Nice way to write. That's why I asked if the 'L' was your wife.
Raynette and Mary, I hope it is clear that the first stanza is 'her' speaking, only the second one is 'his' answer. H
This is so beautiful it takes my breath away. How can you write such funny, non-sensical poetry and then come up with one line this? (A man of many talents!) Raynette
We have to wonder who the 'L' is............your wife? Sincerely, Mary
This is, indeed, simply beautiful. Serene and enchanting. t x