You Small City Comments

Beautiful....... Full of mistrust / And breakage of vows....fantastic doucumentation of such small city. But dear poet, as a poet apart from this poem, you have to find out the trust and oath hidden within such city also......it is the law of nature, two parallel forces are always active within the object. And as a poet you have also to find out love from there. Good poem. Lucid and impressive. Thank you....write more....run long...........10/10. Regards, pranab