Monday, November 24, 2014

You Show Me Safe Comments

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Where the black of night takes prisoners
You show me safe
As stars collide with my wishes
The howling wind becomes a whisper
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Susan Lacovara
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Saadat Tahir 11 December 2014

By the bending branches and the creeping vines Where time is lost and love is found You show me safe Allowing both our breath and beating hearts lovely lovely lovely so charming, poetically rich and nice rhymes nice liked

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Michael Walkerjohn 24 November 2014

Aloha Susan... So similar, yet so emotionally advanced from the write that is your first post... I have just visited these posts... and did an inquiry of a few of them... This is closeness defined... something the majority of humans will never experience except through the word works of those that have, and who have made an effort to expose this to the each of them... I am thankful that I was on the prowl for perfection this night... you are ever so close here... All of the best from this life, to you, and all of your relations... Michaelw1two.

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